留學申請錄取心得：哈佛法律碩士(LLM) 申請文件 Personal Statement 寫作指導 Graduate School Consultation (Law)

[錄取] 哈佛法律碩士(LLM) 

Our client who was applying to LL.M. programs gained admission to Harvard for fall semester 2016.

Admissions results

已錄取LL.M. Program at Harvard Law School 哈佛大學法學院!!! 狂賀!!!

Services rendered

Educational Consultation/留學諮詢

Academic Essay Writing Tutorial/學術寫作指導

留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 、Personal Statement 申請文件寫作諮詢

Major  

申請LL.M.學位，NYU, Harvard 等校法學院碩士班學程 (科技法、人權法等相關)

Feedback  

"Dear Robert, just want to let you know that I was just admitted to Harvard!!!
Thanks for all the support and guidance!!!"

留學申請錄取心得：耶魯公衛 (Public Health) - 留學文件修改 英文讀書計畫 SoP寫作建議

[錄取] 公衛碩士 - 耶魯、柏克萊、約翰霍普金斯、U Mich 、Boston University, Emory University MPH

Our client who was applying to Master of Public Health (M.P.H.) programs gained admission to Yale University, Johns Hopkins University, UC Berkeley, University of Michigan, Boston University, and Emory University for fall semester 2016. 

Admissions results

已錄取Yale University, Johns Hopkins University, UC Berkeley, University of Michigan, Boston University, Emory University 
耶魯公衛碩士、柏克萊、約翰霍普金斯等系所全數錄取!!! 狂賀!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Consultation/留學諮詢

Academic Essay Writing Tutorial/學術寫作指導

留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 、Personal Statement、獎助學金申請寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請MPH學位，Yale School of Public Health - Yale University、Johns Hopkins Bloomberg School of Public Health、UC Berkeley School of Public Health、University of Michigan School of Public Health等校公共衛生、流行病學碩士班學程

Feedback  

留學文件修改，推薦Sofi & Rob
"Rob is great. I am looking forward to work with you guys again."

Fulbright Taiwan Winner - Anna's Guest Post 攻讀博士學位傅爾布萊特獎助金申請與錄取心得 (東亞文學)

親愛的讀者們：

我們感到很榮幸能夠邀請之前的客戶、同時也是今年的Fulbright獎學金 (攻讀博士學位傅爾布萊特獎助金 )得主 Anna 與大家分享她的申請過程以及錄取心得。 
當您在我們的網頁上看見許多極為成功之申請經驗而動心時，我們鼓勵您也能像這些成功申請者一樣，在留學準備的過程中積極與我們討論！

Dear Readers,

It is a true pleasure for me to share this post with you. Anna came to us in June last year ready for a transformation after a bitter defeat in the prior application season. This is the foremost of our significant successful cases for the 2015 – 2016 application season. Anna did everything this time to ensure her optimal success: an early start, diligent attention to details, a very well developed study plan for her future PhD research, and most important of all the bravery to adapt to hitherto unknown circumstances. Success in Taiwan does not translate into success abroad, sometimes quite the opposite. Anna, after her prior experiences, has developed the perfect mindset to achieve success and seize opportunity by the forelock. She placed great faith in us and we were honored to assist her to attain the gateway to her dreams. There is nothing greater of which we can be proud than that; self-renovation and great progress on the path of one’s own heroic quest in life.

錄取心得（Chinese Literature）／作者 Anna 

錄取：University of Washington (PhD), University of Hawaii at Manoa (PhD)

除了妙麗（Emma Watson）讀的布朗（Brown）之外，再加上賓大（UPenn）、北卡（UNC）、威斯康辛（Wisconsin）等，第一次我總共申請了十間學校，全軍覆沒。從一月到四月，一連收到十封拒絕信，我經歷了一場「精神上的覺醒」（spiritual awakening），好吧，其實根本就是「大崩潰」（breakdown）。大概有一整個月，每天在家哭得跟鬼一樣。後來看了一本書，上面寫著：愛因斯坦第一次考蘇黎世理工學院，沒上；羅丹曾經被巴黎藝術學院拒絕，三次。於是我決定捲土重來，也找上了Sofi & Rob。

留學申請錄取心得：Stanford 、UCLA EE 碩士 - 留學文件修改 英文讀書計畫 SoP寫作建議 (Electrical Engineering)

Our client who was applying to MS programs in Electrical Engineering gained admission to Stanford University, UCLA, University of Michigan, UC San Diego, USC, Carnegie Mellon, Georgia Tech and Purdue for fall semester 2015.

Admissions results

已錄取Stanford (史丹佛大學)、UCLA、USC、Georgia Institute of Technology、Purdue、UMich、University of California, San Diego!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模

Academic Essay Writing Tutorial/學術寫作指導

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請 MS program in EE at Stanford 、UCLA、USC、 Purdue、UCSD (University of California, San Diego) 等校電機工程碩士班學程

Feedback  

"Thanks for the great editing support!"

Notes

Statement of Purpose

In your statement of purpose, you should succinctly describe your reasons for applying to the proposed program, which may include:

Preparation for this field of study, Motivation for graduate study, Why our program is a good fit for you,

Future career plans, Other relevant aspects of your background and interests, Interest in specific research at Stanford or specific Stanford faculty (if applicable).

There is no word limit, but it should not exceed two (2) pages in length, single-spaced.

Make sure to set your computer to a Western European or other English-language setting. (We cannot guarantee the ability to access your statement if it is submitted in other fonts.)

Source(s): https://ee.stanford.edu/admissions/full-time-MS
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CS碩士春季班申請錄取心得：Computer Science Masters - University of Central Florida - 留學文件潤稿 Statement of Purpose 寫作教學

[錄取] 美國 Computer Science Masters - University of Central Florida (CS碩士 春季班)
Our client who was applying to MS programs in Computer Science gained admission to University of Central Florida for spring semester 2017. 

Admissions results

已錄取University of Central Florida/中佛羅里達大學!!! 恭喜!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Consultation/留學諮詢

留學出國文件編修 (美國) CV、動機信 Statement of Purpose、評估並尋找適合學程、申請寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請Computer Science Masters - University of Central Florida, 影像分析/Image Analysis、影像處理/Image Processing相關

Feedback  

"Thank you very much! I deeply thank you for all your help, such as tutoring me how to rewrite my SoP and CV and recommending the teacher, Wallace, who helped me prepare for the GRE verbal section. I cannot get this admission from UCF without your help. Again, thank you very much, I appreciate a lot."

留學英國申請錄取心得：University of Leeds - Geography PhD - 留學文件修改 Statement of Motivation 寫作教學

[錄取] 英國 University of Leeds, School of Geography 博士班
Our client who was applying to PhD programs in Geography gained admission to University of Leeds for fall semester 2016. Congratulations on a very lucky late admission! 

Admissions results

已錄取University of Leeds/里茲大學!!! 恭喜!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Consultation/留學諮詢

留學出國文件編修 (英國) CV、動機信 Statement of Motivation、評估並尋找適合學程、申請寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請University of Leeds - Geography PhD博士班學程, Spatial Analysis and Policy 空間資料庫與空間分析、Geographical Information Systems 地理信息系统相關

Feedback  

"I should like to share the good news to you. I have got the unconditional offer from the University of Leeds last week... The perfection of application documents should be credited to you. At the same time, I have learned a lot from your superb writing and experiences. Thank you for guiding me through the application."

留學美國碩士申請錄取心得：CMU、UCLA、UMich EE 碩士 - 留學文件編修 英文讀書計畫 SoP寫作 (Electrical Engineering)

Our client who was applying to MS programs in Electrical Engineering gained admission to UCLA, University of Michigan, Carnegie Mellon for fall semester 2016.

Admissions results

已錄取UCLA、UMich、Carnegie Mellon!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修、潤稿

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬、討論寫作方向

工作內容: 留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議、提高錄取機率

Major  

申請 MS program in EE at Stanford 、UCLA、CMU 等校電機工程碩士班學程

Feedback  

"我後來錄取上了 UCLA CMU UMICH 最後選擇去就讀UMICH ECE 真的很謝謝您和貴公司在我申請過程中所提供的指導和幫助:)"

Notes

Statement of Purpose

留學申請錄取心得：統計碩士 - 留學文件寫作諮詢、英文讀書計畫修改 SoP編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Data Science)

[錄取] Columbia Data Science MS/ UC Davis Statistics MS/NCSU Analytics MS/
UNC INSTORE MS/UMich Statistics MS/Duke Statistical Science MS

Our client who was applying to MS programs in Data Science and Statistics gained admission to Columbia, NC State University, UC Davis, University of North Carolina, University of Michigan and Duke for fall semester 2015.

Admissions results

已錄取Columbia、NCSU、UC Davis、University of North Carolina、UMich、Duke University等校!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

留學文件 (美國) CV、Personal Statement、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請Columbia、NC State University、UC Davis、University of North Carolina、University of Michigan、Duke University、Harvard、Yale等校Data Science/數據科學、Statistics/統計、Business Analytics、Information Management等領域碩士學程

Feedback  

留學文件修改，推薦Sofi & Rob
"I felt I made an absolutely right choice by choosing Sofi&Rob, and I also had a great time working with you to get all those files done...I will recommend Sofi&Rob to my friends who plan to apply next year. Be ready for the upcoming busy fall & winter :)"

"Hi Rob, ...Thanks for your help. I think my admission result is quite good. Here's the list:

Admission:

North Carolina State University, MS in Analytics

University of North Carolina, MS in INSTORE

University of Michigan, MS in Statistics

Duke University, MS in Statistical Science

UC Davis, MS in Statistics

Columbia, MS in Data Science

...Thanks again for your fantastic work on my SoPs.

I would not have gone so far without your help..."

留學英國申請錄取心得：Queen Mary、Manchester、Lancaster 行銷碩士 - 留學文件編修 英文讀書計畫 PS寫作 (Marketing)

Our client who was applying to MS programs in Marketing gained admission to Queen Mary,  Manchester, Lancaster, Birmingham and University of Strathclyde for fall semester 2016.

Admissions results

University of Manchester 曼徹斯特大學、Queen Mary, University of London 倫敦瑪麗皇后學院、 University of Lancaster 蘭卡斯特大學、University of Birmingham 伯明翰大學、 University of Strathclyde 史崔克萊大學 全數錄取!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修、潤稿

工作內容: 留學文件 (英國、蘇格蘭) CV、讀書計畫 SoP、個人陳述 PS 寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議、提高錄取機率

Major  

申請 MS program in Marketing - KCL、University of Manchester、Queen Mary, University of London、 University of Lancaster、University of Birmingham 、 University of Strathclyde 等校行銷、國際行銷碩士班學程

Feedback  

"It's very nice to have you help me with the essay revision, and it is professional and also of high quality. Thank you so much for your help!" 

Notes

Personal Statement/Statement of Intent—

Overwhelming Success!

Our Fall 2015 / Spring 2016 Clients' PhD Application Results

Dear Readers,
It is with great pride that we announce our clients' exceptional results for the past PhD programs application season. Once again our clients who applied all received at least one offer, and all of whom received support funding.

學術簡報、會議論文中翻英、演講稿翻譯與編修潤飾 Academic Essay & Presentation (Chinese Literature)

接案: 2015 June 21

使用方案:    Translation Services/文件翻譯 (學術論文中翻英)

Proofreading and Editing Services/文件精修 (演講簡報精修潤稿)

客戶/譯案: 國立台灣大學 中國文學系教授

工作內容: 三千字論文、演講稿全文翻譯、編修潤飾 Academic Essay & Presentation Proofreading & Editing 針對專業領域提供論文寫作建議

特殊要求: 超急件，國際會議論文/簡報

研究領域: Chinese Literature/中國文學 

Semiotics, Semantics, Pragmatics, Symbolism, late Qing (Ch'ing), Chinese history

Feedback: 

"Hi Robert, 

You save my life! You are a very efficient, responsible and professional editor. :)"

留學申請錄取心得：RWTH Aachen (Automotive Engineering) - 德國留學文件修改 動機信 Letter of Motivation 寫作教學

[錄取]德國 RWTH Aachen Automotive Engineering (英文學程)、Brandenburg University of Technology、University of Siegen等校

Our client who was applying to Master's programs in Automotive Engineering/Power Engineering gained admission to RWTH Aachen University, Brandenburg University of Technology, and University of Siegen for fall semester 2016. 

Admissions results

已錄取RWTH Aachen University/阿亨工業大學, Brandenburg University of Technology/勃蘭登堡工業大學, and University of Siegen/錫根大學!!! 恭喜!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Consultation/留學諮詢

留學出國文件編修 (德國) CV、動機信 Letter of Motivation、cover letter、申請寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請RWTH Aachen University、Brandenburg University of Technology、University of Siegen、TUM/慕尼黑工業大學等校Automotive Engineering自動機工程碩士班學程

Feedback  

申請人分享心得連結: 批踢踢 留學版 [錄取] 德國 RWTH Aachen Automotive (英文學程) 
(分享連結，已徵求客戶同意)

留學申請錄取心得：SVA動畫碩士 (Animation) 美加留學諮詢 SoP 精修潤稿 留學文件修改 推薦Sofi & Rob

[錄取] RIT - Film and Animation (with $14,000 scholarship) MFA/ SVA - Computer Art MFA/ SCAD - Animation (with $5,000 scholarship) MFA/ Ringling College - Computer Animation / DigiPen - Digital Arts MFA

Our client who was applying to Master's in Animation gained admission to RIT, SVA, SCAD, Ringling and Digipen for fall semester 2016. In addition, our client was honored with a $14,000 and a $ 5,000 scholarship from two respective schools.

Admissions results

高額獎學金 錄取RIT - Film and Animation (with $14,000 scholarship) 、 SVA - Computer Art 、 SCAD - Animation (with $5,000 scholarship) 、 Ringling College - Computer Animation 、 DigiPen - Digital Arts 狂賀!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Consultation/留學諮詢

留學文件 (美國、加拿大) CV、讀書計畫SoP、Personal Statement、獎助學金申請諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請RIT - MFA in Film and Animation 、School of Visual Arts - MFA Computer Art (MFACA)、SCAD - Animation 、 Ringling College of Art & Design - Computer Animation 、 DigiPen Institute of Technology - MFA in Digital Arts等校動畫、數位藝術領域碩士班學程

Feedback  

"這次能錄取這麼多間學校很感謝你們的協助！一個人準備有時候真的毫無頭緒，還好有諮詢服務!!!便宜回覆又快速，與Rob Skype討論SOP與面試經驗也學到很多，真的很謝謝你們~"

留學UK申請錄取心得：Business Analytics、行銷碩士 - SoP寫作諮詢、英文讀書計畫修改 Personal Statement 編修潤飾

[錄取] 含獎學金£5000英鎊、獎學金£6500英鎊各一, Surrey Business Analytics MSc /Loughborough University Business Analytics Consulting MSc/Leeds Consumer Analytics and Marketing Strategy MSc/Cardiff Social Science Research Methods (Business and Management Studies: Marketing and Strategy) (MSc/PgDip)/Aston University Business Analytics MSc/Stirling Data Science for Business MSc/University of Southampton Business School Marketing Analytics MSc

Our client who was applying to MS programs in Data Science, Business Analytics and Marketing gained admission to Surrey, Loughborough, Leeds, Cardiff, Aston, Stirling and University of Southampton Business School for fall semester 2016. In addition, our client was honored with a £6,500 and a £ 5,000 scholarship from two respective schools.

Admissions results

已錄取Surrey (索立大學), Loughborough (羅浮堡大學), Leeds (里茲大學), Cardiff (卡地夫大學), Aston (阿斯頓大學), Stirling (史德林大學) and University of Southampton Business School (南安普敦大學)等校!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Counselling/留學諮詢、面試模擬

留學文件 (英國) CV、Personal Statement、讀書計畫SoP 寫作諮詢、英式英文編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請Surrey (索立大學), Loughborough (羅浮堡大學), Leeds (里茲大學), Cardiff (卡地夫大學), Aston (阿斯頓大學), Stirling (史德林大學) and University of Southampton Business School (南安普敦大學)、Lancaster等校Data Science/數據科學、Business Analytics/商業分析、Marketing/行銷等領域碩士學程

Feedback  

留學文件修改，推薦Sofi & Rob
"thank you so much for your help"
"I really appreciate your edit service to help me get the good result."

Notes

How to write a UCAS personal statement 

留學申請錄取心得：CUNY性別研究碩士 (Women’s and Gender Studies) - SoP修改 英文讀書計畫 Writing sample寫作指導

Our client who was applying to Master of Arts Programs in Women's and Gender Studies gained admission to CUNY for fall semester 2016 in only 10 days after applying, a new record among our clients!

Admissions results

立即錄取 CUNY - Master of Arts Program in Women's and Gender Studies 恭喜!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP、Writing sample 10-15 pages、獎助學金申請諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請Master of Arts Program in Women's and Gender Studies at the Graduate Center, CUNY婦女與性別研究學程

Feedback  

"...Got the acceptance letter yesterday. I'm soooo excited. Thank you very much for your help. It's really a wonderful experience to work with you. It looked like we co-work the study and you even polished it and make it better beyond my expectation. I'll definitely recommendation your editing service to anyone who's in need."

Notes

Applicant Statement

留學文件修改 作品集Portfolio潤稿 讀書計畫SoP 編修潤飾 Proofreading&Editing (Game Design)

Our client who was applying to Master's in Game Design gained admission to DePaul University, University of Utah and the Guildhall at SMU for fall semester 2016.

Admissions results

已錄取DePaul University, MS in Game Development 、
The Guildhall at SMU, Master of Interactive Technology (MIT) in Digital Game Development、
University of Utah, Master's of Entertainment Arts & Engineering (MEAE) 恭喜!!!

Services rendered

Academic Applications Proofreading and Editing Service /留學文件編修

Educational Consultation/留學諮詢

Academic Essay Writing Tutorial/學術寫作指導

留學文件 (美國) CV、讀書計畫SoP 、Personal Statement、作品集Portfolio寫作諮詢、編修潤飾並提供專業建議

Major  

申請MS in Game Development at DePaul University、SMU Guildhall、University of Utah、The Master's of Science in Interactive Entertainment at UCF's Florida Interactive Entertainment Academy (FIEA) 等校遊戲開發、遊戲設計碩士班學程

Feedback  

"非常感謝Rob &Sofi的潤稿跟修飾, 讓我拿到了心目中的Offer, 非常感謝"
"我想這次是我的作品集幫了我的大忙. 因為有些學校在面試中有個老師說我的作品集說我作品做的不錯. 再來感謝Rob幫我把作品集修得比較專業, 讓我的作品集得到不錯的評價. Rob也在我面試前叮嚀我一些面試小技巧, 都相當有幫助"

Notes